#12 the meatrix

In the film, every day what I eat was came from factory frames. Many people do not know about the meaning of the factory farm which means, all the live stocks as chicken, pork, or beef are raised by unhealthy condition. Those places usually tiny space that live stocks are impossibly move and are feed mostly only corn, antibiotic pills and hormone pills. The meat markets are growing so fast that suppliers could not waiting for growing naturally, so they are using the all the comical to provide to force to grow. Then, all customers are obtaining same as the live stocks ate. Because of that many people suffer the diseases like mad cows or avian influenza virus. The bottom line is both of people and live stocks are suffering because of human greedy. As the result, come back to human.

The virus circle starts from the live stock’s food, and following to local water. Then, local people drink that virus water. Many children are affected faster than adults, because immune system does not develop as strong as adult. For instance, there are small town that the entire new born baby have problem with the physical obstacle since factory farm was built. Not only have the baby effects also adult had the problems of hormones. There are boy who having the breast because of the hormone effects.The town people figured out the water was contaminated by the farm waste, and then it goes to house tap water. People drink the tap water not only the baby having obstacles, but also destroying water pollution.

That virus water was contained to the local people, not only that those live stock was supplied to all the meat markets. Most of meat buyers do not know where those meats came from or how to growth.
Those factory farm meats are never walk and never eat fresh food even those live stocks eat the hormone pills. In fact that those hormone pills dose not remove or never wash out of the livestock body. Therefore, people who eat that meat are suffering the same symptom as the side fests of the hormones pills or the antibiotic pills. For example, one of the extreme disease the mad cow, people have same symptoms as the mad cows. In Korea, many people could not eat the chicken for two years because of the avian influenza virus. Those virus was effected even it cooked, and people found that most of chicken was from factory farm.

Moreover, the purpose of the factory farm is the mega companies. Most of the factory farm supply to the meat markets which are McDonalds, KFC, or bugerking and so on. Since that those companied foods are one of major reasons of obesity all over the world. The cursed of the obesity could be more than these factory farm meats, but this is serious problem. It leads to all the other diseas. For example,  there are a town  where dose not have fastfood restrauts or thefactory farm meants. The town people never have cancer or obesity, and they are living a  healty long life. Unlike that, the industry twon people are having problems as cancer or obesity. 

As a results, the factory farmeffects not only pollutions also serious helth problems, but all the result effects to human. We creat the problems becuse of that we suffer. However, we should know that we
are also able to fix the problems. In oder to avoid the all the problems, we should know or buy about
the meat or diary products. People should check the list of the discription  of the produts and
looking for organic foods. we have the right to eat healty and live longer.

#11 summury blog

In short cartoon was showing the factory farming the reveling the facts about the factory farming cooperation.  The live stocks raise the tiny cage and feeding them the hormone to grow fast. Then, the livestock suffer in the unhealthy condition and it leads to mad cows disease and the other disease.

 Also, dairy products, milk cheese are also raising same as factory farming.  The factory farming supply all over the states meats market, so they forcing to grown the livestock.  The factories workers work unsafely conditions for make the companies orders.   

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#8 the Marix

Claim…. people are thirsty about the truth, but who knows which one is really truth.

Reason…  in the matrix, the blue pill leads to the real world, but who can tell  that is real world.

            

Questioning of the real world why do you want to know the truth is human nature. People are naturally to reveal the unknown facts even if the facts effect to unpleasant to people. Since human found the fire, people have tried to find the real world or the truth of the truth. Then, people creative the whole different world compare that the moment when they are living. In the matrix was shown the real world when Neo took the red pill. The real world was dark, sad, and hopeless. However, the Alice’s adventures in wonderland turn to the world that unreal, bright, and fun. According to the two different stories, I thought there are no such as the real world. People could not define the truth or real truth, and those stories or theories are just fantasy.



 First of all, dreaming is another world for your conscious in which the dream reflexes your imagination or something in the past. I could not say the dream showing the future or means something special. In the movie, Neo took the red pill, so he awaked the real world that human were raised for the energy sources and the resource were dreaming in the matrix world. Whenever Neo went to real world and the matrix world, he woke up at the sleep as on the desk, bed, to the unplugged. He was dreaming at both worlds, so it was not clear that which one was real world.



Next, people could not prove to exist another world. There are no scientific facts or evidence that existence of the other world. People make up the interesting stories and escape from where people involved world. Also, some people were manipulated to show their dignity or special. Many people announce the theory of the world, but none of them gave the rational evidence.  In Egypt, people believed that after you died your spirit and your body would meet only if you were not guilty from the present.  The God of death was only able to judge which was Pharaoh, so that the pharaoh were able to rule the people as GOD. However, there was no evidence of afterlife world.



Last, no one is able to define what or where real world exists. There is millions of conspiracy a theories state there are other world exist. However, people could not find any evidence to prove that theories. Also, some people address from their imagination, dream, or fear, so that people also sympathy as them.  For example, there are many ghost houses that people visits, but no one see or hear the ghost. Some people are shown the many pictures, films, or radio to prove the ghost, but most of them are fake or unclear. There are no sign that such a ghost.



 In short, many people want to discover another world because they want to escape from crucial reality. Therefore, they creative the theories there are real world where you have never seen. However, those are unproved and unclear fake stories. Therefore, people should know that there are  no such the new world that you could escape from the your world.

#7 CATW test rewrite.

Many people are crazy about the reality shows, such as American Idol or Fear factors. Those TV shows have been running successfully among them others. In the article,______ Sexton has pointed out the dangerous message from the reality shows.In this article, the author pointed out the most of reality TV shows are  contain the most
 He said the major point are those program has too competition, ideal images, and false dream.
 I noticed I was also into the reality unintentionally. I think this should be a wakeup call to all parents. Because of the dangerous messages that I have read is already appeared to my children.
    

First, the reality TV is shown the materialism, which is hues amount to winner prize. In the show, attenders do whatever it takes to win the game, cheating, beating, lying, and killing. The Audience or observer, even my kids think that they could get those money, if they do smae as the TV shows. One day, one of my son said he got all ‘A’ grade from the school. Before the test I promised him to buy new iPhone, only if he got good grade. However, his counselor called me and my son manipulated his test score.



The other reality TV shows the only value of the appearance than the value of true ability. All those TV shows produces all the visual images, so it effects stronger than other media. After watching the show, it start issue that how they looks or what they wearing.  Few days ago, there are person who got plastic surgeries more than seven times have got issued, because she said she wants to become a singer. She hasn’t tried any effort for singing, yet she spent most of time on the surgery table. However, because of her pretty face, she is singer who is never singing for live.  Even the worst part is my kid loves her and they start to imitate her style. All the media show her pretty face and the perfect body, so people are not really care about her singing.

The most dangerous message of the reality TV show is false dream, which means if you done something that it might issue you could be a millionaires. Few years ago, the jack ass first part movie was running even make second part and it made a lot of money. This movie was inspired from the TV show and YouTube that people did something really stupid things. However, children are addicted those kind movies and they said it looks cool. Also, they figure out how easily make a money to just have fun. So many kids think studying is worthless.  For example, one kid tried to make his own video as the TV show; he imitated what he had watched. He ended up broken his back born never walk.

In short, most of reality shows are very amusing and fantasied because it replaces normal people life with the show. However, that kind of show has disadvantages; the materialism, false values and false ideal image of dream.  Therefore, whoever makes the show and parents have to aware that your kid are watching the shows.