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The  New york times wrote as atricle called " mom, dad, buy the broccoli."  The article talks about chlidren are living a health lifstlye. In order that, the coucil of betterbusiness bueaus they are working on healthier foods and lifestlyes for younger children.They reduce the protion of foods or to limit  using cartoon or miovie charaters on it.

 I agress with the council of better business buerus planning for younger children to eat healthy. Not eating healthy food can cause diabetes, obesity and other adult diseases. I could understand why the coucil of better busuness bureaus are trying to make a change. When I was in high school, I could easily buy bag of chips, soft drinks and ice creams in school. Most of healthy foods were hard to find, and it cost a lot more than these junk foods. Becuse of that I was over weight and had high blood pressure. Beside those junk foods in school, all the advertigment is that were should things that I should not eat.

 It is not easy for children to eat healthy foods. As you know that the health foods are much expensive than junk food. Those healthy foods are fessh foods or home made foods.   Many parents dose not have time to prepare the fresh food for their family, so that they prefer buying the junk foods. In order that, kids are used to eat those junk foods thatn fresh healthy foods. However, my parets kept distance from those kunk foods for thire children, so  that I hah had since ten years old. After that they both were working and I ate the Mcdonald's.  I ganied so much weigh in a only two months at age ten.

 Many comcpanies make unhealthy foods that children could not say no to, such as Mcdonald's, Kellogs, Cadbury, Kraft foods end so on. All those companies are unising  such  attractive things that children could not avoid. they are using a cartoon or movie charaters or toies.  For inctance, Mcdonald's are specificly using the happy meals series that many children  collect those toies.


As a result, the children's food  and beverge advertisy intiative and other groups of people are making such a good decition for younger children's health. It is important  to learn how to live a hearlier life style. This is all the adult respeosble to keep our ildren being healthier and  living  healthier.